RELY UPON.........?
I chase the streets
I looked from door to door
could find some ppl of my trend
perhaps, they are called friends.
but can i rely upon them......?
I moved on and on
the path took me to spritual zone
souls lead me to the entrance
but leave the preeciding part on me..
so, should i rely upon them......?
defined relations too
I handled with utmost care,
In return I got their hand ,
but till a point
when they too give me a stare..
goals, ambition inspires me all
they triggered a part in me
to reach the zenith.
when failures turned on
those inspirations were also turned off..
lovers , players, hopeless fake ppl
I have tried them all
they promise to go far
but like the eroded soil
they left the land barren.
An intimate part
suddenly pops up
from within
It whispers some everlasting words
those words answer my peculiar questions
the voice within is not me
the vibes stayed for a nano second
I wish it cauld last a moment or more
but that nano second
left an everlasting impression
THE IMPRESSION I CAN RELY UPON....
WITHIN ME I CAN INTRUST UPON......
I chase the streets
I looked from door to door
could find some ppl of my trend
perhaps, they are called friends.
but can i rely upon them......?
I moved on and on
the path took me to spritual zone
souls lead me to the entrance
but leave the preeciding part on me..
so, should i rely upon them......?
defined relations too
I handled with utmost care,
In return I got their hand ,
but till a point
when they too give me a stare..
goals, ambition inspires me all
they triggered a part in me
to reach the zenith.
when failures turned on
those inspirations were also turned off..
lovers , players, hopeless fake ppl
I have tried them all
they promise to go far
but like the eroded soil
they left the land barren.
An intimate part
suddenly pops up
from within
It whispers some everlasting words
those words answer my peculiar questions
the voice within is not me
the vibes stayed for a nano second
I wish it cauld last a moment or more
but that nano second
left an everlasting impression
THE IMPRESSION I CAN RELY UPON....
WITHIN ME I CAN INTRUST UPON......
this gal is a total freak....sumtimes...even OVERPARS me too...
ReplyDeleteya...and u knw wht she isa gr8 fren of mine...
wht i reeli liked was ki-- i erang her up, when in roaming...and she was totally elated..
gud...i felt really good about it
awesome composition!!!!ur words hav lyf n ur thoughts make others think.......
ReplyDeletehmmmm...looks like some real close ppl have hurt u..i've realized..it's not necessary that ppl leave u in tough times they leave u in good times too..when they r meant to leave our life it surely happens..n in those times we look within n find that " WITHIN ME I CAN INTRUST UPON..."..n it's noneother than GOD who stays inside our heart even when everbody's gone :)
ReplyDeleteP.S: i'm back girl!
awesome,fantastic..
ReplyDeletewords are not enough..
truly deeply touched my soul...
fabolous work
lovers , players, hopeless fake ppl
ReplyDeleteI have tried them all
they promise to go far
but like the eroded soil
they left the land barren.
i'd say thts something straight from the heart....
parv thanx
ReplyDeletei think it really cumes from d heart bcoz i went thru sum bad tym for an instant bt den realised it soon dat u r for nobody n nobody is for u... ultimate funda to live life .....
happy blogging.... after long tym..
Nice poem.....yes the search is never a journey outside our self, but a search within for the inner self......when we learn to communicate with our true self...we meet our best friend the one who would never desert us........but I cannot but disagree with your thought that"u r for nobody n nobody is for u".......after you learn to love yourself and are always there for yourself...you never fall short of friends and defined relations also also lend you hand as long as you want..........the flower however may look for sweetness outside the nectar hides within it.......
ReplyDeleteHEY thanx dreamer,
ReplyDeletei completely agree wid wat u said. thanx for sharing a thoughtful thought...